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Prologue: Voren Family Massacre Ch 1 The Day Before the Awakening Part 1 - A Typical Morning in Brinewatch Ch 2 The Day Before the Awakening Part 2 - Lira Taryn Ch 3 The Day Before the Awakening Part 3 - Throne Wars & Family Time Ch 4 The Day of the Awakening Part 1 - Kael Awakens Ch 5: The Day of the Awakening, Part 2 - Psyche Dust Ch 6 The Day of the Awakening, Part 3 - Aftermath Ch 7 A New Beginning, Part 1 - First Customers Ch 8 A New Beginning, Part 2 - Dust Heads Attack Ch 9 Testing the Limits, Part 1 - A Big Fish Ch 10 Testing the Limits, Part 2 - Marks & Tests Ch 11 Testing the Limits, Part 3 - Trouble with the Competition Ch 12 The Soggy Bottom Boys Ch 13: Re:Test, Part 1—The Ascension Games Ch 14 Re:Test, Part 2—False Alarm Ch 15: A New Life, Part 1—Home & Job Acquired Ch 16 A New Life, Part 2—Beast Rampage Ch 17 A New Life, Part 3—Inner Universe Creation Trait Ch 18 A New Life, Part 4—Barely Escaping Death Ch 19 A New Life, Part 5—Farewell, Brinewatch Ch 20 Settling In, Part 1—All I Want for Ascension is You Ch 21 Settling In, Part 2—Searching for Answers Ch 22 Settling In, Part 3—Questions about the Vorens Ch 23 Foundations & Flames, Part 1—Ashport Disposal & Recovery Ch 24 Foundations & Flames, Part 2—Kael's First Demo Job Ch 25 Foundations & Flames, Part 3—Quick Work & Big Pay Ch 26 Foundations & Flames, Part 3—Aura, Force, Ki & Chakra Ch 27 Foundations & Flames, Part 4 Ch 28 Foundations & Flames, Part 5—Date Night Ch 29 Foundations & Flames, Part 6—An Old Friend, New Partner...and Flame? Ch 30 Foundations & Flames, Part 7—Foundations Complete Ch 31 Oh, Master! My Master! Ch 32 AGE, Part 1—AGE & Sabotage Ch 33 AGE, Part 2—Stabilizing the Ashport Simulation Ch 34 AGE, Part 3—Discussing Everything with Lira Ch 35 AGE, Part 4—Beasts & Games Ch 36 AGE, Part 5—The Night Before Lira's Awakening Ch 37 AGE, Part 6—Lira's Surprise Ch 38 ACT, Part 7—It Has to be You Ch 39 AGE, Part 8—AGE Magazine Ch 40 AGE, Part 9—Kael's Interview Ch 41 C-Rank Blood Mend Ch 42 Double First Day Ch 43 War & Plots Ch 44 How to Evolve a Talent

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Ch 44 How to Evolve a Talent

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17th Rotation of the Cyrandros Cycle, 3448 A.E.

The pre-dawn cold gnawed at Kael’s bones as he pushed through Brinewatch’s salt-etched streets, sea brine and volcanic grit swirling on the wind. Stars still clung to the sky, faint and cold, the sun just a whisper on the horizon. His muscles ached from yesterday’s brutal drills with Vara, but anticipation hummed in his veins—today was his second lesson with Garrick.

The squat forge loomed ahead, squat and black-stoned, smoke curling lazily from the chimney. Through the cracked shutters, firelight pulsed like a heartbeat.

The steel door creaked open at his touch, and the familiar smell of carbon, ash, and hot metal washed over him like home.

Garrick was already awake, already at the forge, already working.

A half-finished greathammer hovered midair, suspended by some unseen force while lines of molten gold pulsed through the head in precise veins.

Kael stepped inside and waited.

The smith's eyes flicked to Kael. He grunted. “Late again.”

Kael peeled off his cloak, letting the heat chase the chill from his skin. “Mornin’, Master,” he said, voice still tinged with the rough slang of the Grays.

“Six cycles of grunt work,” Garrick said. “And you still walk in like a boy with soft lungs.”

Kael just stared back, silent.

Garrick studied him, then gestured toward the hearth. “Stoke the flame. No bellows.”

Kael frowned but obeyed. He knelt, reached inside, and adjusted the coals manually. A trickle of ki leaked from his fingers—not intentional, just a reflex. The flame stirred, then flared.

Garrick nodded. “Better. Still weak, though.”

Kael stood, wiping soot from his palms. “You going to teach me how to forge now?”

Garrick set the hammer down and folded his arms. “Today ain’t about steel. It’s about you—strengthenin’ your existence by evolvin’ your talent.”

Kael blinked. “Evolving… my talent? How does that work?”

Garrick stepped closer, his voice dropping to something almost reverent. “Your talent isn’t just a skill, boy. It’s your vault—your well. Talent acts as a lifeforce crucible, syncing with your mind, body, and soul. That vault fills with lifeforce. The more you can hold, the stronger you become. That’s what we call your life level.”

Kael’s brows drew together. “Life level?”

“Aye. It’s what separates a tradesman from a master. A fighter from a legend. The higher your life level, the more power you can pour into your work. You want to forge tools that can hold mana? That amplify divine power? You need more than technique. You need a vault that can handle the current.”

Kael nodded slowly, absorbing the weight of it. “So how do I evolve it?”

Garrick’s eyes glinted. “Slowly. Painfully. But there are ways. Divine beings—S-ranks and higher—they’ve figured out methods. I’ll show you one of ‘em.”

He gestured toward a quieter corner of the forge, away from the clamor of fire and steel. “Sit.”

Kael obeyed, settling cross-legged on the soot-blackened stone. Heat pulsed at his back as he closed his eyes.

“Your talent is a well,” Garrick said. “Deep and quiet. Find it. Feel it.”

Kael focused on his breath, letting the clatter of the forge fade. At first, there was only darkness. Then—something. A flicker in his chest. A second heartbeat, warm and quiet.

“There,” Garrick said, as if he could see it. “That’s your vault. Now you learn to draw from it. Carefully. You increase your lifeforce either by expanding the vault or by compressin’ what’s already there—makin’ it denser. Some do both.”

Kael’s eyes cracked open. “Which do you do?”

“Concentration. Lifeforce tempering.”

“Tempering?” Kael echoed.

Garrick nodded. “Same principle as tempering muscle. You stress it. Microfractures. Push it just beyond its limits—then rest, recover, rebuild. It adapts. Grows stronger.”

“Like bones toughening under strain,” Kael said slowly.

“Exactly. Kickboxers start splinterin’ their bones at age three. By the time they awaken, their skeleton’s already steel. That’s the difference between awakening bone... or awakening iron.”

He leaned in slightly. “But get it wrong, and you break yourself. A misstep and your lifeforce cracks instead of strengthens. That’s the risk. That’s why precision matters. You don’t hit it with a hammer—you prick it with a needle.”

Kael swallowed. “And you do this while forging?”

“Aye. Draw on your lifeforce just enough to strain the vault. Not too much. Never too much. That stress forces it to grow—if you replenish it properly. You’ll learn to use elixirs to refill what you burn. Your rich ass. You've got the money now.”

Kael let the words sink in. “How do I actually… channel it?”

Garrick reached into the fire, pulling free a glowing ingot with tongs. “Through intent. Not just thought—will. You forge with your whole self. Your talent flows through the strike.”

He set the ingot on the anvil, raised his hammer, and struck. Each blow rang like a bell. A faint shimmer gathered around his arms—silver light. The metal pulsed with a subtle glow, alive and resonant.

Kael stared, breath caught. “That’s your talent?”

“Infused,” Garrick said. “It holds the shape better, cuts deeper, lasts longer. And that’s only possible ‘cause my life level can support it.”

He paused, expression tightening.

“Your talent’s strange. Feels like a C-rank, maybe stronger. But if you probe deeper, it’s still E-rank. That doesn’t make sense. I thought you were evolvin’ it... but now I think it’s stalled. Your lifeforce fluctuates too much. Like it’s being drained or capped by somethin’. Could be your lineage—your father’s gift was wild too. But I’ve never seen one locked like this.”

Kael didn’t know what to say.

“All I can do,” Garrick went on, handing him a fresh ingot, “is teach you what I know. And hope it works.”

Kael took the ingot, its weight grounding him. He placed it in the fire, watched it begin to glow, then moved it to the anvil. He closed his eyes, felt for the warmth in his chest, and raised the hammer.

Flow, he thought, willing that pulse through his arm.

He struck.

A faint hum stirred, something barely there. But the metal remained cold. Lifeless.

“Again,” Garrick said.

Kael struck again. Then again. Sweat beaded on his brow. His limbs burned. The ingot held—dull, inert—but Kael could feel it: the faintest thread connecting him to it. A whisper of potential.

Garrick nodded once, satisfied. “You’ve started.”

Kael wiped his forehead, breath coming hard. But a grin tugged at his lips.

“I’ll keep at it, Master.”

“Good,” Garrick said, turning back to the forge. “Then get to work.”

Kael tightened his grip on the hammer, heart pounding with something fierce and steady. Theron Vex, Ironclad, the war for the slums—all of that could wait.

Right now, he had a forge.

And a future to shape.

****

The water ran red with soot and sweat.

Kael scrubbed the grit from his arms and face, watching rivulets of blackened water swirl down the drain. His body still ached from Garrick’s lesson—his second real one—and the lingering echo of lifeforce tempering still pulsed through his bones, deep and subtle like a second heartbeat.

But today wasn’t about forging steel.

It was about the dead.

Once dried and dressed, Kael moved with purpose. He confirmed the plans with Lira, then messaged everyone he could trust—Malik, his mother, Sera, even Kevyn Taryn and a few sympathetic reporters he’d worked with before.

“I'm hosting a ceremony today at 3pm. Important. Personal. Monument unveiling. Press welcome.”

Then he tapped into the logistics network Lira had helped him build and double-checked on the progress of the materials Lira ordered the night before. They were already on site, and the monument was already near complete. He paid the outstanding balance out of pocket, not from any company account. This wasn’t for business.

This was for them.


A few hours later, the square outside Westerlow Divide—a liminal zone on the line between the outer southwest and southeast districts of Halder's Walk and ___—had been transformed. Kael chose this area because it was it struck a balance between distance the poor have to travel to honor the dead, safety of the monument from beast waves, and forcing the rich to notice the unnoticeable. It was in the city, but close to the slums.

The wealthy didn’t have to pass through it, but they could.

The poor didn’t need permits to gather, but they would.

A long stretch of reinforced blacksteel wall had been erected overnight. Dozens of names were etched into its gleaming surface.

Sela Marn, 6 — Died of untreated infection
Tomien Brag, 13 — Crushed in a tenement collapse
Unidentified infant — Found in waste chute, Brinewatch
Seri Kallor, 10 — Devoured by feral beasts during border breach

Name after name. Hundreds. Some documented, some whispered. Some only guessed at. Each a child. Each abandoned.

At the center of the wall stood a plinth of bone-white stone carved into the shape of a pair of open hands reaching up—not toward the sky, but toward the city behind them.

The plaque read:

“To the Children of Ashport’s Forgotten — May the weight of your silence echo through the halls of power.”

Kael stood atop the stage. Cameras hovered in the air, streaming live across the local net, and several of the city’s major news agencies had already picked up the feed.

Lira stood beside him, hands folded. Malik was in the front row with a dozen kids from his orphanage, all dressed in the best clothes they had. Elira stood tall, thinner than she'd been in her prime, but her eyes clear with purpose.

The crowd was small at first. Then, it grew.

By the time Kael stepped up to the podium, several hundred had gathered.

He didn’t wait for applause.

“This wall isn’t for you.”

Kael’s voice carried without amplification. He had devoured so many legendary scraps that projection came easily now.

“It’s not for the politicians watching this feed from their sterile towers. Not for the slumlords or the investors or the executives sipping tonic while children starve three streets over.”

“This wall is for them.”

He turned and gestured toward the monument behind him.

“The ones who died before they had a chance to awaken. The ones your laws say you’re supposed to protect. The ones you ignored, or abandoned, or quietly watched disappear into the dirt.”

He paused, scanning the crowd. Some wept. Others stared in silence, fists clenched.

“And now that people like me, people like Lira, like Malik, like my mother, Elira Voren—real people—have stepped up to do what the city won’t, you fine us. You cite us. You try to shut us down.”

“You think because we came from Brinewatch, from the slums, that we’ll roll over.”

Kael’s eyes burned, not with heat, but conviction.

“We won’t.”

He pulled a stack of documents from a folder and held them high.

“These are the fines. The citations. Issued by name: Department of Sanitary Affairs. Department of Charitable Oversight. Zellen Marrick, District Compliance Officer. Fyra Dren, City Health Commissioner. That’s right. I’m naming you.”

The crowd shifted. Reporters whispered into their comms. Kael didn’t stop.

“You’re attacking the people trying to help. Why? Because we make you look bad? Because we cut into your bribe money? Or is it something deeper—fear that if the poor rise, you’ll lose your grip on power?”

He leaned forward.

“Then be afraid.”

A camera drone zoomed in as Kael jabbed a finger at it.

“Because I’m fighting back. I’m challenging every citation. I’m suing every department and individual responsible. And if Ashport’s courts won’t hear it? I’ll take it to the federal court in Caldenya itself.”

Lira tensed beside him. He hadn’t told her that part.

“You think your seats are untouchable? That your incompetence will stay hidden behind bureaucracy and fine print?” He swept his arm toward the wall again. “You’ve already failed the next Elandor. Maybe he died in Brinewatch. Maybe she was one of the faceless names on this wall. Maybe humanity’s next rise was buried in a shallow grave because you couldn’t be bothered to follow your own laws.”

The silence that followed was deafening.

Then, soft clapping. Malik. Then others joined. Louder. Stronger.

Lira leaned over and whispered, “You just made enemies of every power player in Ashport.”

Kael whispered back, “Then they should’ve done their jobs.”


Cutaway: Elsewhere in Ashport

In glass towers and marble offices, comm screens flickered. Men and women in fine robes and ornate pins watched the speech in tight-lipped silence.

A middle-aged man with hawkish features—Commissioner Verdan Korr, head of Internal Stability—tapped his fingers against the desk.

“Shut him down.”

His aide hesitated. “Sir… federal law—”

“Then make it look legal. Audit him. Investigate him. Make his friends disappear if you have to. But that boy just painted a target on his back.”

In another office across the city, a man with eyes that weren’t quite human sipped tea, watching Kael’s face on the screen with quiet amusement.

“Bold. Very bold,” the beast muttered, his tongue flicking against his teeth. “Let’s see how long you last.”

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